Presentation Feedback & Changes

ADDING MORE INFORMATION ABOUT THE PROJECT AND COURSE

Lukas and I presented on behalf of our collaborative team on Wednesday morning.  After the remuneration presentation, we decided as a team that the presentation runs a lot smoother and is more professional when only a few people present rather than six people.

It was hard to gauge what Russell or the class thought of our presentation, as no questions were asked, nor were there many suggestions for our webpage made.

However, I still endeavoured to improve and fix the issues with the webpage

1. The first improvement Russell suggested was to include information about the course and the course staff.

Taking this information I then decided to dedicate the first half of the 'About' page to information about 'Computational Design' and the 'Digital Collaboration Studio'.

I also included references to the course staff.

I made all headings and images click-able links to the appropriate webpage.  E.g. Nicole's name and image if clicked, a new tab will open on Nicole's staff profile page on the FBE website.

Also utilising the benefits of clickable links, I made student names linked to the students blogs.

Additionally, included in the webpage was reference and once again a link to the group's Wiki.

Using the clickable links was also a good way of referencing softwares and information used for the projects.    On the 'Project Limitations' page, I made sure all softwares used were linked to their appropriate pages.

Finally, I decided it was a good idea to put social media links, that were linked to the according pages.  CoDe, UNSW and Scenic World were also linked

FIXING WEBPAGE MISTAKES AND ERRORS

Whoopppsss.......

I wasn't aware of this mistake until mid presentation when Russell said "can you please go back to that last page", I laughed and said "No, I just noticed a mistake".

Im sure he would of loved to read "I'm a paragraph....I'm a great place for you to tell a story and let your users know a little more about you"

There were also a few spelling mistake which I didn't pick up on.  Unfortunately this brought down the overall professional nature of our presentation.